I actually think that it is very very good. In fact I have also received a salesletter today from a big name and yours is better.

Thanks,
B

I am an avid tester. I had already tested the headline, price and layout on my OTO. It got to the point where the conversion increase that was being achieved was so minimal that I realized I needed a fresh approach if it was to increase significantly.

On Terry's first try, he came up with some great suggestions. However, what impressed me even further was that he created a new concept which tied in really well with the front-end offer. On initial tests, the conversion rate on the OTO has now increased by almost 300%!

Ben Shaffer

Your copy is Fantastic to say the least, especially at the price that he is offering his services at.

He’s extremely responsive (For a copywriter that alone is amazing.. When do you sleep?)

His turnaround time is incredible (if only I can get all outsourced work back as fast)

What more can I say???

I usually prefer to write my own copy, but at these prices I would have been insane to pass this deal up.

I'm currently testing his copy against one of my current champions for a product of ours that pulls at 5.8% and Terry's copy is holding pretty steady so far (although the test is still pretty young so we'll see)

BTW - Even after he finished writing one of my copy jobs and gave it to me, he STILL contiued to add and make improvements to it... Simply Amazing.

I think I’ve found a new guy to add to my roster :)

Ty Cohen

Hi Terry,

Thank You!

Both copies look great! I checked out the Spare Change Profits one also - an incredible improvement over my awful attempt. I will learn a lot just by comparing the old to the new.

I really appreciate the work and the great value.

If there is one online truth I've learned its this:
Even if you are selling $1 bills for 25 cents you
are not going to sell many without great copy.

Thanks for the great copy Terry!

Tom Dean

Hi,

I'm very, very happy about what you did, but I'm sure you knew it before i tell you... Excellent job!

Sincerely,
Nicolas Arrighi

Hi Terry,

This looks excellent - I'm very impressed with what you've done here and how you did it all - thank you VERY much!!!!

I appreciate your feedback on the graphics. It's valuable having that neutral observer's perspective and, if I understand you correctly, you're saying to get graphics professionally designed and include those in the copy.

By the way, Terry, I very much appreciate your professionalism and the feeling I get that you're doing much more than just trading a service for money, that you're giving your all to the process, putting your heart in it. Like you say, we're each serving our role to help everyone in the way we're meant to, because we're all integral aspects of the collective consciousness and we each have our role to play.

Thanks Terry.

I hope you're enjoying your weekend :-)

Warmly,
Dan

Hi Terry,

I just finished reading the whole rewrite, and one word... "Awesome!"

I think you did a fantastic job and I like everything you've done.

Thank you.

Warmly,
Dan

That's great Terry,

You've taken the original concept and made it saleable.
I particularly like the headline, and the "special offer"

Many Thanks

Tony

Hey Terry,

The salesletter is fantastic! Thanks for all the work you put into it.

I like the suggestions you made. I am gonna get a new graphic done for the product.

Thanks again,
Ross